urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:seanan_mcguire Rose-Owls and Pumpkin Girls The Journal of Seanan McGuire Seanan McGuire 2009-08-18T01:55:52Z urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:seanan_mcguire:142679 seanan_mcguire @ 2009-08-17T18:53:00 2009-08-18T01:55:52Z 2009-08-18T01:55:52Z Jekyll and Hyde, "I Need to Know." So I'm in the middle of a super-fast clean-and-jerk on <i>Feed</i>, before I kick it back to my editor. I'm processing comments tonight, and just got this little beauty from Brooke, referring to my tendency to occasionally lean on unnecessary modifiers:<br /><br />"LARGELY. I wish to efficiently move you on a collision-free path to AN ALLIGATOR'S GULLET."<br /><br />I love my proofers. I love them so hard.<br /><br />That is all.