With "Star of New Mexico," we close the book on Johnny and Fran, and look to the future. It's the end of an era. It's the beginning of something new.
You can download the new story now from the InCryptid short fiction page.
This also serves as your discussion post.
As an author's note, if you want the perfect song to accompany this story, download "Chasing Twisters" (the song, not the EP) by Delta Rae. I cannot recommend it highly enough.
Goodbye, Fran. I'll miss you.
June 6 2015, 00:18:41 UTC 2 years ago
Like other folks have already said, I'm surprised that what really upset me was the mouse. That was when I lost it. I also really loved that I got to see the mice from their point of view, rather than just having them get in the way, or having them as amusing diversions. Their pain makes them more real now.
I love that you're sharing the history of this family. It makes the family and backstory more real and gives me emotional investment in them, too, not just the current generation of books. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
June 6 2015, 15:54:16 UTC 2 years ago
June 8 2015, 00:25:57 UTC 2 years ago
June 9 2015, 19:48:11 UTC 2 years ago
First the "but we need to witness, for how else may they live on in our memory" and then the "I cannot imagine a life without my priestess so I will cease trying" - such pure devotion breaks itself against us