...I have no issues with pointing out typos, especially in the Velveteen stuff, which is quite long, but maybe you could also, you know, acknowledge liking the thing (assuming you did)? Otherwise it gets a little pointed and aggressive-feeling, and decreases the odds of getting another story.
July 1 2014, 06:23:44 UTC 3 years ago
Like mentioning the amusement that, rather than igniting the biosphere, she FROZE THE SKY. O:>
July 1 2014, 17:13:03 UTC 2 years ago