A brand-new story about the Luidaeg, "In Sea-Salt Tears," has been posted on the equally brand-new Toby Daye short fiction page. It is available in ePub, MOBI, and PDF formats, and is free for download. (So far, this is the only free Toby-universe short story. We'll be adding listings for the published-in-books shorts in a little while, but it's not hyper-high priority.)
This story is best read after One Salt Sea, and it further details the relationship between the Luidaeg and Elizabeth Ryan, the Selkie clan leader we met at the very end of the book. Please download rather than trying to read locally; my server will thank you.
Cover graphics are by Tara O'Shea. All short story electronic conversion thus far has been done by
Go forth, read, and please feel free to use this as a discussion post, which means there may be spoilers in the comments. Tread carefully.
Enjoy.
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also Only dress code in the kitchen is ‘don’t be on fire while you’re eating,’
August 23 2012, 20:48:07 UTC 4 years ago
Fire distracts the chefs.
August 23 2012, 18:36:10 UTC 4 years ago
I know you wouldn't -- shouldn't -- confirm or deny this, and I don't actually want any more information anyhow. But I hope that, when the bill comes due, whatever changes for the Selkies makes it better for poor Liz -- and for the poor, poor, hasn't-caught-a-break-in-five-thousand-y
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I know fairy tales never really are, but NOT FAIR.
Poor both of them; she made her own choice and broke her own heart, but secrets and sins of the fathers stacked the odds against Liz from the start.
August 23 2012, 22:12:15 UTC 4 years ago
Liz never could have won. But Annie wished she would...
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I want to ask - Liz is given the choice, when she's told the full story. And she can choose to take the skin - or her mother will be burying her. I wonder - are there occasionally selkie children who choose not to take it? Surely there must be some. What gets told to those teenagers on the beach in those cases? What would have been told to them if Liz's mother came back, still with her skin, to choose someone else to pass it to?
I'm trying to imagine giving up fae immortality to go inland and die. Hard to imagine what would drive them to that.
August 23 2012, 22:13:32 UTC 4 years ago
As for why they give it up...they give it up because they don't want to outlive their children.
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August 23 2012, 23:11:34 UTC 4 years ago
That was sad, no, that was heartbreaking. And beautiful.
Poor Luidaeg.
Thank you for sharing this.
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August 23 2012, 23:32:54 UTC 4 years ago
YOU ARE MAGIC.
(Also my brain decided to produce related words to that, rather than words in any of the stories I'm trying to work on. Okay then, brain.:
And how could you hate her for it? Selkie child without a skin, forever dreaming of the sea… How much would you give to go home? What would you do to feel yourself slide into the shape every particle of you had longed for since your first breath?
Can you say you would not have chosen the same, in her place?
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August 24 2012, 16:52:26 UTC 4 years ago
I am glad you liked it.
August 24 2012, 02:51:37 UTC 4 years ago
The story. Wow. The story. It was, as others have said, heartbreaking and beautiful. I tend to associate stories with music, and the first thing that came to mind was Darren Hayes' 'Taken By the Sea' (video is a bit iffy but audio is pretty good for a live performance). (The second was Talis Kimberley's 'One Big Sea'.)
I want an e-reader now so I can put this on it and take it places with me and make people read it.
August 24 2012, 16:52:41 UTC 4 years ago
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August 24 2012, 03:13:09 UTC 4 years ago
I also love that it was about two women--but the love was the center of the story rather than the fact that it was two women.
While this is going to probably be a spoiler thing--when Oberon "leaves the sea" to Annie, does it indicate that she's actually in charge of the undersea in some sort of large-scale way? Or was that just a strongly suggested option for her from Oberon?
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Thanks you.
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You really are such an amazingly talented writer!
Looking forward to Ashes Of Honor even more now!
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