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May 24 2012, 16:49:34 UTC 5 years ago
Here's my reasoning: for the most part I think you've done a fantastic job of portraying George's disability, for lack of a better word. I found it all pretty much spot on and that especially includes her dealing with no longer having this problem. (Though, I can't say I have any experience with that but it actually jives with my thoughts on the psychology of being born blind.) However, I'm still vaguely confused about one almost throwaway statement from the first book where George's asserts that she doesn't need to blink because her eyes no longer require lubrication...which doesn't really mesh with my understanding of light sensitivity coping methods. In specific, squinting and blinking become almost involuntary as a means to deal with nasty, painful light sources. Or at least the ones that don't completely wipe out a photophobic person's vision. Unless that's not an issue for someone with retinal KA, which brings me back to my question above.
Anyway, I read Blackout yesterday and I am reeling from it to the point that any coherent thoughts are currently beyond me. So, well done and thanks for an awesome ride. :-)
June 12 2012, 15:51:35 UTC 5 years ago
Georgia's condition causes light sensitivity in part because the person her eyes were modeled off of has light sensitivity (she has Georgia-eyes in the real world, it's very strange to see), but largely because her pupils no longer contract at all. Technically, she should have detached retinas from muscle atrophy, but I decided not to deal with that. It was my cut corner.