If someone else had been the first to die?
I have written an alternate ending to Feed, picking up at what was originally chapter twenty-five. It's called Fed, and I'm very pleased with it, in part because it shows that no, the original ending wasn't the worst possible outcome. This was.
Fed is kindly being hosted by Orbit, thus preventing me from becoming a blibbering mess in the week leading up to the release of Blackout, and for right now, you can download and read by liking the Facebook page they've set up specifically for this purpose. (It's getting a one-week Facebook exclusive for marketing purposes, and I surely would appreciate it if you went and hit the "like" button.) This is full of spoilers, so I recommend against reading it if you haven't read Feed.
Rise up while you can.
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::more sniffles::
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Oh. One thing while I'm still in "analyze (so as to avoid emotions)" mode:
spank Orbit's proofreader. He has Rick saying he's required to *circumnavigate" the security, rather than *circumvent* it.
Ps. you get extra evil points for the bit about "we should have taken the gun from her". That had me thinking Georgia shot herself shortly after shooting the Governor.
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(So do Mahir and Rick, I think. Can we have a group hug? Probably won't help, but it's something. *wibbles* ;)
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Joss Whedon himself couldn't have broken my heart so thoroughly.
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Need to reread the books, since I've just had a brilliant reminder of how much I love Shaun and George.
This ending is definitely worse, but somehow it still fits. Breaks my heart, but it still fits.
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Is there any other way I can read/support this?
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(actually, they kinda were... my brain is weird.)
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I am curious: what was the deciding factor that made you go with the other ending as opposed to this one?
(Just for the record, I agree with that choice. The real ending worked better narratively, I think. But I am curious.)
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After our class concert though, maybe.
Can't wait to see it!
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I'm assuming that Shawn was shot; because there were two sets of ashes. Or else the contents of Dr. Abbey's letter to Dr. Shoji from Deadline would've had a much sooner reveal!
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Hm. I may need something light and fluffy to (re)read, like The Ghost Map. (Actually, the second InCryptid book would be ideal, but I carelessly neglected to invent the time machine.)
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Well done. (As usual.)
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If you check Amazon today you should find that the Kindle edition is listed with a May 22nd release. We hope you enjoy BLACKOUT!
Best,
The Orbit Team
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*happy dance*
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