If someone else had been the first to die?
I have written an alternate ending to Feed, picking up at what was originally chapter twenty-five. It's called Fed, and I'm very pleased with it, in part because it shows that no, the original ending wasn't the worst possible outcome. This was.
Fed is kindly being hosted by Orbit, thus preventing me from becoming a blibbering mess in the week leading up to the release of Blackout, and for right now, you can download and read by liking the Facebook page they've set up specifically for this purpose. (It's getting a one-week Facebook exclusive for marketing purposes, and I surely would appreciate it if you went and hit the "like" button.) This is full of spoilers, so I recommend against reading it if you haven't read Feed.
Rise up while you can.
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May 16 2012, 17:58:16 UTC 5 years ago
(Though one thing I was expecting to happen in your alternate universe (based on Deadline spoilers) didn't and that would have made it even worse for the Masons. I may be a horrible person.)
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I like the real ending better. I never thought I'd say that.
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I was afraid you were going to do something like a reversal of the ending of FEED, and incorporate part of the important thing revealed about Shaun and Kellis-Amberlee. I'm glad you didn't, though; it would have been far too Romeo and Juliet.
Still, ouch.
And the Masons suing the site for the cost of Georgia? Yet another demonstration of their pettiness. Wow.
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Pardon me while I leave my desk to go bawl my eyeballs out.
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Oh, OUCH.
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Thank you.
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Also FED cracked me up. I don't know why.
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I'm not coherent anymore.
Now I'm need Blackout.
And more George and Shaun.
brb sobbing forever
May 16 2012, 20:21:36 UTC 5 years ago
*tissue*
May 16 2012, 18:57:54 UTC 5 years ago Edited: May 16 2012, 19:03:27 UTC
*is speechless*
*is still speechless*
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Ghods DAMN, Seanan. Just, wow.
[edited to remove sentence that I didn't think about being a spoiler for Fed, because I figured everyone would read the excerpt before reading the comments, and I was wrong.]
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grumph.
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GRRRRRRRRR.
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yeah, the ending of Feed suddenly doesn't..., nope, still hurts as much. But it is a better hurt than this one.
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Calling all my Feed fiend friends who ARE on FB to let them know, though...
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You don't pull any punches, do you?
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May 16 2012, 20:39:58 UTC 5 years ago Edited: May 16 2012, 21:06:35 UTC
I'm getting an "The webpage at https://a.pgtb.me/facebook/app/53669/re nderi/ might be temporarily down or it may have moved permanently to a new web address." error, in both Firefox and Chrome, after "liking" the page.
I'm also swearing about that... will check back again later.
*sniffle*sob*want instant gratification!!* *grin*
Tried again in Firefox, it works. Meep.
(Memo to self: be careful what you ask for...)
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May 16 2012, 20:47:08 UTC 5 years ago
I made my husband go to the Tea Gardens so I could get pics of the fish; it's a truly lovely place that I would have missed if not for you (& Toby). Thank you.
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That is all.
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But I love you best right now.
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