Because Deadline doesn't have a proper ending, and they don't want to encourage this behavior from publishers.
Okay. Look: if your definition of "proper ending" is "the story is over, and I can walk away satisfied and never need to read another volume," then no, Deadline doesn't have a proper ending. I have often said that the only time it's appropriate to end on a cliffhanger is in the second book of a trilogy, and Deadline ends on a pretty major cliffhanger. I can't apologize for that. It's the nature of the trilogy structure that part two will often end on a cliffhanger, and is allowed to do so. I don't end series books on cliffhangers; the Toby books, and the InCryptid books, all have solid, closed endings. I try to make sure there's always more story, but you can still walk away if you need to. This book is not those books.
Let me be clear: Deadline has an ending. There is a point where it ceases to be Deadline, and becomes Blackout, and that point is where the book ends. The Newsflesh trilogy is three books long, and those books are intrinsically linked, but each of them begins, and ends, at a certain place. The thrust and mood and structure of each volume is different, and when you pick up Blackout, you'll be reading a very different book, even if Deadline ended with some pretty major questions unanswered. I didn't pick that end point arbitrarily. I picked it because that was where the story of Deadline ended, and the story of Blackout began.
I completely understand and appreciate frustration over unanswered questions, unfinished measures, and endings that don't appear to end. And I also understand why some people have chosen to buy Deadline and put it on the shelf to wait for Blackout. I wrote back to the person who emailed me and said that I was sorry, I hadn't done it to increase sales or because my publisher made me; I ended the story where I did because that was where the story ended. And I stand by that.
Deadline may not have a "proper" ending.
But it has the right one.
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Wow, that's an impressive level of dumbassery right there.
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Some people are daft.
June 13 2011, 20:08:46 UTC 6 years ago
Plus I got excited about the mention of autoimmune disorders. Possibly because that's my specialty. / DORK.
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And that bit about punishing the publishers? WTF?
June 13 2011, 20:24:51 UTC 6 years ago
It's the same kind of logic used by Amazon reviewers who give a book one star because they thought the Kindle price (which authors have nothing to do with) was too high :-\
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June 13 2011, 20:10:21 UTC 6 years ago
What bothers me is when authors do that on one-off books that they never had any intention of continuing on into a series (I'm looking at you, Robert J. Sawyer, and your "3000 years later on Mars" BS). If it's got major plot lines left unresolved, and no book to tie those up in the future, then I get cranky.
Also, I somehow think that this person isn't going to start a rash of people not picking up Book 3 in a trilogy because it "encourages bad behavior" - Book 3 is when you GET your proper ending, so why wouldn't you get it?
tl;dr - people are dumb.
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(still completely ridiculous, but it gives me a handle on where this person is coming from.)
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But really, there has never been any secret that Newsflesh is a trilogy, and that basically means a story in three parts. Unlike a series which can be picked up in the middle (and often that's the only way the reader can find it, if the earlier parts are OOP), a trilogy is expected to be not quite standalone books. Oh, there are some wher it has obviously just been chopped for length (not quite in the middle of a sentence, but just at the end of a chapter with no type of closing), and I've got annoyed about that, but Deadline doesn't do that. I was -- OK, not quite 'happy' at stopping at the end -- comfortable with where it ended, just as I was with Feed. I certainly wanted more, I'm greedy, but it wasn't necessary. I didn't even continue with the 'teaser' for Blackout, since I reasoned that it was less likely to end in a satisfactory place (because the planned ending places were obviously at the publication points).
Hmm, that's an interesting point. There's the 'teaser' for Blackout, which isn't finished yet. Does that mean that the 'teaser' is in the way of being a draft, and so may change drastically in the actual book, or is that now set in stone and you have to start Blackout that way?
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But I don't think an actual fan could drop the series at this point. And no one (besides maybe the editor) gets to try to influence where an author ends her books.
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June 13 2011, 20:16:56 UTC 6 years ago
But the basic plot of Kelly showing up at Shaun's apartment with information and people trying to kill her and trying to figure out what it all meant and who was at fault was answered in Deadline, which also answered some of Feed's questions as well. The business with Dr. Wynne being the one who set Kelly up to get Shaun and co. and the revels about what reservoir conditions and the variants of KA really meant, and the confrontation in Nashville seemed to provide an adequate climax and conclusion to the plot. It may be that the reveal that a tropical storm bringing in a new form of insect-transmissible active KA, and George having a clone introduces the plot of Blackout, but again -- I'll allow that far more in a middle book. Especially if the final book gets printed, which seems likely, short of the Rising, since you have an existing draft and a contract.
Now, it may be that Deadline and Blackout could be combined, but given the amount of plot in Deadline and the amount of set-up for Blackout, I suspect this won't be the case. Deadline seems like a complete series book, even if it is intimately linked with Feed and Blackout.
(I'm sorry, I appear to have Thoughts on series books.)
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I'll also say that any literary 'books should do x' rule is going to have exceptions. I used to have two examples of what I thought were plot devices that would make me automatically give up on a book, because when I'd run across them it had seemed like an obvious authorial trick and I couldn't get back faith in the story. I've since found stories I loved that broke both rules, and one of them was Feed.
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Aw, yay. I am glad I broke the rules in a way you could love. :)
June 13 2011, 20:30:42 UTC 6 years ago
The thing is, and I say this a lot and hear this a lot, people just don't want to think any more. They want to read and watch tv solely for entertainment purposes, and if something makes them think, they drop it like hot rocks. And it's the pits. It leaves those of us who do like to think and be challenge hanging out here on a limb.
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My favorite example is Stephen King's The Cell. I will not give away the 'ending', because I highly recommend the book. But I will say that you wait with baited breath for hundreds of pages to see if something can be resolved...reach the penultimate moment...and the book ends!
When I finished the book, did I want to shake the ending out of Mr. King? Well, yes, I certainly did. I also wanted to shake his hand, because as a writer...I totally appreciated that he had left me hanging. I was mulling over and playing out in my mind how that damn ending went for months. It was a brilliant way to end the book.
As for the Newsflesh trilogy, that is how it has been presented from the start. And being a trilogy, I expected to be left wanting more at the end of each volume, with the middle volume being the most likely to cause hair pulling anxiety. The person clearly has no understanding of storytelling structure.
Look at Star Wars. (The original three movies, if you please, none of the others exist in my world.) At the end of Empire we are left on these notes...
Luke and Leia do not know they are siblings, and are confused by what they feel for each other.
Leia is falling for Han, but may never see him again.
Luke has lost his hand and is beginning the process of becoming mechanized.
The Empire is WINNING. Our heroes have no idea what their next move should be.
Yet, over the years, many people...fans and critics alike...have argued that Empire was the best of the three movies.
When it comes to Newsflesh...no one can judge the 'ending' yet, because we haven't READ it.
Now that I have truly exposed both the utterly high levels of my geekery, and my total lack of punctuation skills (thank Isis for commas, I use them for everything!), I shall return you to your regularly scheduled blogging.
Rise Up While You Can!
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I'm sorry you had to deal with that.
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I am used to duologies / trilogies that are really one book. I prefer when these end on rest notes rather than cliffhangers, but if the work's good enough, I've got no problem with this. If the work isn't good enough, well, I have a different problem with it.
In the case of the Newsflesh trilogy, I already knew there'd be a cliffhanger. I've not read it, and no one has spoiled it for me except to answer my direct question about whether there'd be a cliffhanger. See, my problem isn't to buy or not to buy. It isn't even when to buy -- I have the book on top of the to read pile, and only one book I am obligated to read first.
My dilemma is whether to read Deadline now or wait a year, and well... we all know I'm not going to be able to wait.
Things that currently annoy me about books (which I not seen in any of yours):
-- Nothing really happens. Oh, it seems like stuff is happening, but afterwards, I realized that I read through a whole lot of nothing. If this is a book in a series, it's either badly written or marking time.
-- The status quo is reset at the end of the book, because we can't actually have anything change or resolve, now, can we? I'm not talking about "The character solves another mystery" -- that's legit, especially if we're talking about a series where a character solves mysteries. I have no beef with Sherlock Holmes. I'm talking about "The character solves a mystery, but nothing is actually resolved on account of it."
-- The Wrong Sort of Thing Happens. This is a really tricky call, because it's subjective. I'm talking about when the author's changed everything in ways that just don't feel right. Or maybe the author is always changing everything so that nothing is stable, which means that there's no solid ground for me to enjoy -- a character's personality will be rewritten on a dime to enable the latest plot the author has in mind. (Fifth season Buffy Troll episode, I am thinking of you.)
I am starting to get tired of the idea of a series that's like a soap opera, where there's some chunk or other for sale every X months. This is... not necessarily bad, but very much not to my taste.
It is also very much not the Newsflesh trilogy.
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I've always thought that we need more ambiguous endings. They force you to think, and in the case of cliffhangers in the middle of a trilogy, they force you to anticipate.
I've just started reading Deadline, but I fully expected a cliffhanger, because like you said, it's the second book in a trilogy. I'm kinda shocked by the entitlement issues of that email writer. Seriously, who says that kind of thing? Sheesh.
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For the rest?
I got nothing. A proper ending? How the book concluded was as proper an ending any book with a sample chapter of the next one could have possibly contained. I don't even.
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Personally I couldn't imagine Deadline ending any other way, I remember getting toward the end of the book and practically praying for it to end the way it did.
That being said you'd think an ending such as the book had, would make the reader want to read on, regardless of how long they may have to wait for the next book, not stop reading entirely.
Sometimes humans are so odd.
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The kind of endings I DO hate are from authors who spend 700 pages and only 3 days have elapsed and then in the last chapter, give a synopsis that gives like 6 months worth of things happening.
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I mean, he would punch a lot of people in the face, but especially this person.
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