THERE WILL BE SPOILERS.
Seriously. If anyone comments here at all, THERE WILL BE SPOILERS. So please don't read and then yell at me because you encountered spoilers. You were warned.
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Have fun!
June 1 2011, 16:31:35 UTC 6 years ago
I still enjoyed Deadline and can't wait for the next book, but it really put a damper on how much I loved the book.
June 1 2011, 17:01:09 UTC 6 years ago
The short answer is "because they told me it was there." I actually tried to argue them out of it, and just kept getting contradicted by the fictional people. "It's icky." "We're not related." "It's inappropriate." "This isn't YA." "It's unnecessary." "No, it's not. Here are eight reasons why." "You were raised as brother and sister." "We were raised as props for photo opportunities."
So basically...it was there because it was there. I'm sorry it made you uncomfortable.
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June 1 2011, 17:12:26 UTC 6 years ago
And certainly, you don't need to apologize. You're not in the business of making everyone happy. Just because I was squicked out by it, doesn't mean that other people won't enjoy the relationship or that it shouldn't have been there. But I appreciate it all the same. ;)
And just as an FYI, that one part certainly hasn't stopped me from talking the books up to people. I already have my copy loaned out to one friend and another is reading Feed right now. I just know that there are certainly people that it would definitely be an actual trigger for and will refrain from passing it along to them. (I'm really going to have to make sure to get them back so I can have you sign them at CONvergence! ;))
June 1 2011, 17:15:41 UTC 6 years ago
Part of why it was so absolutely necessary will become clear in Blackout.
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June 1 2011, 17:39:00 UTC 6 years ago
(And yeah, I just spoiled the living hell out of myself by reading this thread, but I'll have the book by Friday, and I don't know how this gets revealed, so there's still plenty left to shock me.)
June 1 2011, 19:06:57 UTC 6 years ago
Have you committed any sort of incest? We just like to know these things. You know. For science.
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June 1 2011, 19:57:29 UTC 6 years ago
Even though incest in fiction is generally a squick for me (consensual or not; hell, consensually together stepsiblings have been a squick for me) somehow Shaun and Georgia aren't.
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A bit late to the party...
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Re: A bit late to the party...
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June 1 2011, 21:02:50 UTC 6 years ago
Like, when George said "and our bedrooms are connected."
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June 1 2011, 19:52:11 UTC 6 years ago
(And sure, I have an incest squick nine miles wide, but when they're not actually related, that's a moot point -- it's emotionally tangled up as all hell, but that just makes it interesting.... ;)
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June 2 2011, 12:16:32 UTC 6 years ago
I never felt they were actually having sex, though; more just part of an absolute, loving codependence. Does that make sense?
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June 3 2011, 19:41:46 UTC 6 years ago
My reaction to that scene was just a sigh and "Oh Shaun." And I can't say it came as a surprise, exactly, I'd wondered.
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June 5 2011, 02:03:56 UTC 6 years ago
Slip of the tongue?
Dude. Dude. The last thing right above that is about sex.
Yeah, but... OMFG.
She went there.
Oh, she totally went there.
That's hella brave.
...Shaun's so fucked now.
Well, yes...
SHUT UP, BRAIN.
Mind you, my head being what it is, this was my fictional characters commenting on your fictional characters, so it was more than just me thinking this on my own, it was like a conversation. And I totally get what you mean by 'they told me it was there'. Sometimes we gotta just do what the voices tell us.
I do have commentary on the rest of the book as well. It goes sort of like this: OMFG OMFG OMFG ahahaha poor Mahir OMFG OMFG she would have gotten WHAT NOW? OMFG OMFG oh Kelly (but she didn't die on screen!) OMFG OMFG OMFG INSECTS OMFG.
I finished the book in the doctor's waiting room (apparently I 'just' have a virus; I did not wave the book in his face and yell 'SO WAS KELLIS-AMBERLEE') and managed to not get any weird looks from people, despite the part where I started humming 'The Black Death' because now I have ideas for a K-A themed rewrite.
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June 6 2011, 23:58:48 UTC 6 years ago
I had the feeling that they were partners but there was nothing I could really put a finger on unless it was the scene when they checked into a hotel and got one room and a point was made of the receptionist's disapproval, and the fact that George didn't care what they thought.
Anyway a good book, not as tear inducing as Feed but a good story.
I am slow as it occurred to me when I was driving about last week what a news Blackout was.....
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June 17 2011, 21:22:40 UTC 6 years ago
I totally missed that there was actual incest, even after reading Deadline (I'm slow that way), but it doesn't squick me.
To the degree anything about all of that annoys me, it's that Shaun has to feel like shit to be forgiven for being a person so damaged that he doesn't realize someone's interested in him and when, after a long day of new hell (until the next new hell) breaking loose, he lets someone who knows he's way damaged seduce him, and who lies (possibly to herself as well) about only wanting comfort sex, as he's falling asleep calling out George's name.
If he has to take responsibility for his actions under those circumstances, so does she. Reverse the genders and have a guy walking in on a woman coming our of the shower to make a play for her, and my squick button goes off.
The idea that this is the shittiest thing Shaun's done to date has me going, "Er, wait. So, it's shittier to call out the wrong woman's name when you're damaged goods giving way to a seduction after that kind of day than it is to slam your male colleagues against the wall, repeatedly, with both sides knowing that it won't be the last time? Really?"
Don't get me wrong -- apologizing is good, understanding he fucked up is good, even not arguing with everyone else is good. If there were no other reason it's good, there would be the need to keep the team functional. I get all that. But saying Becks is the helpless, utterly wronged party just says things about both genders I'm not prepared to accept. I know saying, "Hey, I'm interested in you, and I think you're just playing hard to get. Am I right?" is really hard, but you know? I'd have no sympathy for a guy failing to ask a woman that, and I think Becks is as capable as any guy. Is it understandable for her to misread, and then to leave without talking to Shaun the morning after (aka the reason he can't apologize as soon as he's conscious)? Sure. Absolutely. But, he gets to be human, too.
So, er, yeah, hot button there. An odd one, I guess, but it's definitely there.
(And there's the hot button of, "Dudes? You're telling Shaun he should go back in the field as an Irwin when one of that absolutely sanest things he's doing is realizing that this would be suicidal. What is the matter with you?")
But the incest itself? It actually makes more sense than what I thought was going on. After Feed, I'd assumed George had never had sex, and that Shaun might not have either. After Deadline, I'd assumed I was right about George, but Shaun clearly had at least enough experience that Becks wasn't his first. This makes a lot more sense.
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