Wednesday, I began reworking the book from the beginning, to see if I could figure out what the problem was. Twenty pages in, I figured out what the problem was. Twenty pages after that, I came up for air.
Thursday, a package containing the page proofs for An Artificial Night landed on my doorstep, roughly four hours after the official sign-and-return contracts for Late Eclipses and The Brightest Fell landed in my hands. And to this I say...
Here we go again.
Tonight, I'm going to go home, pick up the page proofs, and decamp to the Starbucks down the street, where the combination of caffeine, iPod, and no fixed bedtime will enable me to burn through a decent number of chapters before I collapse into a twitching heap. Tomorrow, I'll get out of bed, take my walk to the 7-11 (land of "it's exactly a mile and a half round-trip"), and get back to work on The Brightest Fell. By the end of the weekend, I expect to be at least eighty pages into both manuscripts.
Toby's world is one that's very familiar to me, and very welcoming, because I've spent so much time there. At the same time, The Brightest Fell has been a challenge—it's resolving a lot of things that should make people very happy—while An Artificial Night remains my favorite of the first three, and thus needs to be as bad-ass as possible. So, you know. No pressure or anything.
But gee, it's nice to be running away with the faeries again.
May 21 2010, 18:16:59 UTC 7 years ago
(Looking forward to both, by the way).
Re-read Rosemary and Rue over the past week. <3 Yay, Toby. :-)
May 21 2010, 18:39:59 UTC 7 years ago
People need to be told these things...
May 21 2010, 18:43:32 UTC 7 years ago
You had me at "October Daye, Book Five".
I read books by the truckload. I've only seen the first two Toby books, of course, and it's already my fourth favorite series after Travis McGee, Aubrey/Maturin and Master Li...and since those serieses are complete, it may be that you surpass even those. It's that good.
Come to OryCon this year. I will have Toby filks, and if they amuse you 1/10 as much as A Local Habitation amused me, you'll have the time of your life.
Re: People need to be told these things...
May 21 2010, 18:46:23 UTC 7 years ago
(I am monosyllabic right now.)
May 21 2010, 18:53:50 UTC 7 years ago
I really need to walk more. I just hate how busy the streets are that I'd have to walk to get anywhere I want to go--wide six-lane blvd with heavy traffic. Yuck.
May 24 2010, 14:55:09 UTC 7 years ago
May 21 2010, 19:00:44 UTC 7 years ago
May 21 2010, 19:29:12 UTC 7 years ago
Have fun writing and can't WAIT for September!
Have fun writing and can't WAIT for September! <looks askance again in Vixy's general direction....>
May 21 2010, 19:48:23 UTC 7 years ago
This is also why I recommend the series *highly*. Because I read each new draft entirely, from page 1 (as I think all the proofers do). These are books I literally read from beginning to end over and over and over, and *still* get caught up in them to the exclusion of all else around me.
May 21 2010, 23:31:18 UTC 7 years ago
Take pride in your actions.
May 24 2010, 14:55:59 UTC 7 years ago
May 21 2010, 22:36:26 UTC 7 years ago
Hmm, maybe the proofing/critique list needs buttons...
May 24 2010, 14:56:31 UTC 7 years ago
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May 21 2010, 19:58:41 UTC 7 years ago
Good luck this weekend!
May 24 2010, 14:57:20 UTC 7 years ago
May 21 2010, 20:19:17 UTC 7 years ago
Good luck with your work plan--may it come to pass.
May 24 2010, 14:57:39 UTC 7 years ago
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